....for my novel. In seven days 268 pages 245 Pages broken down. The pathos removed in many places, searched for and chose a more conciliatory ending.... and.... I started myself, I'm looking for forgiveness in my novel, for example ...
Title_Options for my novel
- Lockdown - a lockdown - from disappearance - of disappearance/a lockdown - the Wave - Broken Body - Fail - Belief - book, told from behind - The dissolution of boundaries - A Passion - I think, I need ...
the voice (former belief) center part, 1
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRMpT1w-_Ts 1 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=43ifGcEVTNA 2
prov. title: the voice
Dolly still believes, the forsaken, her pain is exclusive, because he, the man is like all those men on their ships, in love. she, all men, love like in the movies, love like on a ship, on her Victoria and so they love every woman i ...
prov. title: the voice
For sure, in the personal, the human comes to the fore, but at a certain point in life, private pain becomes private shame first, later to farce.
VII
' If a man knew, that he cannot survive his own history, would he then tell them differently??'
Overdue corrections to the Manu, Chapter VII.
'Do you know, who I am? Come and listen! Actually my name is Baby-Girl-Dramedy-Diva-Taff, but since I live here on the side of the road, I'm called the love clochard!'
—- Mouse Sacer/Lockdown (21)
I ran across the street with the tub and climbed over the fence. Thick snowflakes swirled through the air. “I talked to people, Mice, about you! With experts, you know. Experts |? Pahh! You say, I should let you go. You say … ...
From my untitled novel———– transcription, that I no longer feel
'So I returned home, back to Ghost City, Place of the haunted and those, who still want to become one. location, there the garden, but solid trees. Was physically run down, Only one Lieutenant Pinson had me like that in my entire life ...
Revision of an untitled novel
I ask, what didn't fit with the title, which overall doesn't fit. You say, it's too pathetic, everything. And, it is not anymore, as at the beginning (Capt 1, 2,3) naughty, ironic, light and sarcastic. The protagonist's voice can no longer sound the same ...